I think the most appealing angle is on the third scan and in the top right (with the two chairs, the fireplace, and the door in the foreground). It's homey, it's intimate.
However, it's a bit too empty and/or large-looking (as a result). The fix? I would take some of the furniture you've used in your other thumbnails. There probably should be a small table where Della and Jim eat. I love the cooking stove you also have (third page of scans, bottom right). The laundry drying on a string is a fun touch! Finally, there should either be an old couch or a small two-person bed that can be used as a couch with cushions in the daytime. On your 2nd page of scans (top left) you have what looks like a couch that could work. Finally, if possible, it would be great for storytelling purposes to have an opening on the outside (most likely a window) to show that it's winter outside, and maybe have some Christmassy decorations inside and outside.
Alejandra!
ReplyDeleteI think the most appealing angle is on the third scan and in the top right (with the two chairs, the fireplace, and the door in the foreground). It's homey, it's intimate.
However, it's a bit too empty and/or large-looking (as a result). The fix? I would take some of the furniture you've used in your other thumbnails. There probably should be a small table where Della and Jim eat. I love the cooking stove you also have (third page of scans, bottom right). The laundry drying on a string is a fun touch! Finally, there should either be an old couch or a small two-person bed that can be used as a couch with cushions in the daytime. On your 2nd page of scans (top left) you have what looks like a couch that could work. Finally, if possible, it would be great for storytelling purposes to have an opening on the outside (most likely a window) to show that it's winter outside, and maybe have some Christmassy decorations inside and outside.
Go for it!!